Oh No! A Common Pitfall that can distance your Readers from your Characters

A large issue I’ve been struggling with for quite some time had no name. Now, I know that it was the concept called “filtering.” I’ve had an unholy amount of critiques/beta reads come back on my work complaining how the reader felt “distanced” from the main character. “I want to know what she’s thinking! I want … More Oh No! A Common Pitfall that can distance your Readers from your Characters

The Dos and Don’ts of Character Development

How far is your story? Is it still bubbling in your imagination, waiting to spring out? Are you on your first draft? Third? One hundredth? No matter what stage, it is time to look at the character development in your story. I want to point out that character development doesn’t start out on the first page, it starts … More The Dos and Don’ts of Character Development

5 Mistakes Writers Make When Writing Dialogue

One of the most important skills a writer needs to have mastered is the proper usage of dialogue. Dialogue provides many things to the reader: Information and Backstory, Character Personality, Plot Flow, Interaction and Dynamic Action. You may say, well some stories don’t have much dialogue. Wrong, what about internal dialogue? Even if characters are not … More 5 Mistakes Writers Make When Writing Dialogue